This is a good day, Christie thought sarcastically to herself as she cleaned the blood stain on the floor, waiting for Lorqueil to come back. A day which I regained my memories and find out that my lover is a vampire.
“Well, you can’t say that today is not eventful,” Christie sighed gloomily to her teddy bear. “Anyway, at least I get to know that my boyfriend is good-looking, cares for me and is someone of a royalty. Isn’t that what I always wanted? Except for the fact that he is a vampire. I had never dreamed that I’m going to fall in love with a vampire.”
“It seems like some of Lorqueil’s blood is still remaining in my body, isn’t it?” Christie said through a mouthful of cereal. Thanks to all these strangers that visit in the morning, Christie only got to eat her breakfast at
“You know what I have in mind, teddy?” Christie asked her teddy bear, knowing that teddy bears will never laugh at her or call her idiot. “Half of me loves Lorqueil so much that I’m willing to do everything for him, but another half of me is afraid of the adventures I’m going to have if I stay with him. The Christianne Annelora in me is not at all prepared for adventures. She wants to stay as a normal human being, even though that means she’ll have no magical powers. What should I do, teddy?”
Then it clicked.
“Oh, yes!” Christie exclaimed as her fingers played with the fang necklace Lorqueil gave her. “Why had I not thought of it before? I’ll find someone who can change Lorqueil and I into normal human beings! Lorqueil said both my father and his father disagree our love affair, so I guess I can’t get help from any magical kingdoms. I-I’ll get a human magician! A normal human being who had possessed magical powers! I’ll find such a person to help me out-if only I know where can I find such people!”
*Hope that i did not spoil any thing...Sorry if i had done any. ^^ Do continue writing for chapter three. This is just the beginning of chapter three, wrote by a beginner! Correct my mistakes please. Good Luck!!!*
3 comments:
Good attempt, everything-chan. Just want to say that when you want to create a turning point for a story (turn the story to an almost completely different direction), you must do it slowly to give the readers the "right" feeling. Don't make them feel like "eh? Why suddenly become like that?"
So, well, you had led our story to a very unique direction. I'm sure that neither Yuu-chan or me myself had expected that Christie will thought of getting help to change her and Lorqueil into normal human beings. That shows that you're really creative. However, I had to edit quite a lot of your post so that your creativity won't seems to happen too abrupt.
Hope you don't mind this busybody here editing your post! ^_^ And gambate, as a beginner you're doing real good!
Actually... I left some spaces in my entry...
Lorquille with come to Christie tonight. I thought somebody will continue on that. Lol.. It is not my story anyway, I cannot complain...
Ya I remembered that part but since he hadn't arrive, we gotta do something to pass the time away right? Don't worry, I did make him come back when the night arrives *wink*
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